Rebecca Scheper
Introduce the issue and
state your claim:
·
Teen rebellion is increasing and it is
very problematic because more kids are running away, killing themselves,
getting into drugs. We need to realize how to stop this
·
With this issue, more kids are getting
involved in things that are not good for them. One big thing is drugs and
alcohol and breaking the law in general
·
My claim for this paper is about why
teenagers rebel against their parents. What causes their motives to do that
Propose
relative contributions of different cause of phenomenon or importance of
different consequences:
· One
cause for this rebellion is teenagers want to be independent. They want to make
their own decisions and not follow what their parents tell them to do. They want
to do the complete opposite of what their parents want them to do
· Another
cause is they want to feel more grown up. They want to try to be more grown up
so they experiment with different things. They want to do stuff that older
people do.
· Another
cause is the teen rebelling wants to themselves from
childhood dependency on parental approval for always being the good child.
Respond
to objections to argument:
· There
aren’t any objections
Conclusion:
· Rebellion
is common among adolescents and teens. They do it out of independent and just
wanting to grow up and because they are tired of being sheltered or known as
the “good child”
· This
is problematic because its leading to suicide from drugs or alcohol and
criminal activity too
Good, detailed outline. There definitely are objections. If not, anticipate them and counter them. You were supposed to write a complete para. For that, try to find something that can hook your audience's attention. In talking about causes, also mention what comes on the way of their desire for independence, ..... I mean, those things themselves may not be causes if their parents or others do not ask them to do otherwise. So, you may have to flesh that out.
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