Saturday, November 8, 2014

topic proposal


The topic for my proposal is to get more healthier places to eat on campus. I think a good solution is to add more places on campus that provide a healthier choice of food like fresh fruits and vegetables, good protein and whole grains. The problem with this is the cost. If there is to be healthier food on campus the more the food will cost on campuses. Students would have to pay more money to be able to get this. In some surveys freshman students fear gaining the freshman 15, which goes to show we need healthier food.

Proposal Arguement Assignment


       I think the purpose of assignment 4 is to help us write a proposal to help us solve problems and using data and surveys to back up our ideas. It's a good way to use data in an argument. I think this assignment is pretty clear. I am confused about how to write this paper exactly. It says that we need a cover letter and an actual name of someone, I don't understand why we need that.

Thursday, November 6, 2014

proposal arguement


1. A practical proposal propose an action to solve some kind of local or immediate problem. For example, if there is a problem with flooding in a certain are they would have to make action to stop it. A policy proposal is in which problems affecting the common good. For example, is to try to stop pollution so we can breathe healthier air.

2. The three main phases of a proposal argument is the description of the problem, proposed solution and justification for the proposed solution. When describing a problem you want to call attention to the reader to the problem. You want to describe the problem with anecdotes or statistics. The next phase is to explain a solution. It's good to stress the usefulness of your solution. You want to use step by step methods of finding a solution to win the audience over. You also need to show that the solution will solve the problem partially or wholly.

3. A. Marijuana should be legalized because it is a natural plant that does not affect your health compared to normal cigarettes.
   d. Violent video games should be illegal because kids play these games and it could make them think they can do it in real life and that is ok to do that to people.